Feedback on Drafts

Video -

* Re film the pan over the magazine ( Camera to shaky compared to the other shots withing my video)

* Insert of an image of Rockstar and his Wife ( More Clear, what he has lost)

* Flashbacks of wife before she died - ( Equal Timing)


CD Cover -

* Text size, colour, font
* Print on CD (best image)


Website -

* Colour - Font - Combinations
* Speak to the band members, about what they want.